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Sunday, 7 June 2015

Autumn leaves

Autumn Leaves


Autumn leaves glitter

as the rain sprinkles down.


Autumn leaves turn crunchy, dry, and brown

like burnt toast.


Autumn leaves have symmetrical lines

like butterfly wings.


Autumn leaves float to the ground

like a fluffy white feather.


9 comments:

  1. What a great story this story made me have a picture in my mind of watching the leaves turn all crunchy and brown I like the way you said 'like a fluffy white feather' I can't wait to read your next piece of writing :)

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  2. Great writing Isabella! I really enjoy reading your writing. I like how you explained about how the leafs turn brown like burnt toast and like a fluffy feather! I can't wait to read your next story. Keep up your great writing! :-)

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  3. Great writing Isabella. I like how you said autumn leaves turn crunchy, dry and brown like burnt toast. Also I like how you said autumn leaves float to the ground like a fluffy white feather. Good job Isabella! 😃

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  4. Wow Isabella!!! This is a great autum poem. It's great because of the words you used because it made me make a picture in my mind of the leaves changing and creating as a crunchy brown leaf from a red soft leaf. Can't wait to hear more of your creative writing😛✏️

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  5. Wow Isabella
    I like how you said Autum leaves glitter as the rain sprinkles down because that made a picture in my head

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  6. This is great writing Isabella. I could picture myself looking out the window at the beautiful autumn leaves and I could smell the burnt toast. This is great writing and I can't wait to read your next story x:)!!

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  7. Wow! This is great writing Isabella and I really like the bit when you say "autumn leaves glitter as the rain sprinkles down". Write more!

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  8. I like how in the first paragraph you said: autumn leaves glitter as the rain sprinkles down.

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  9. Wow this is fantastic I love it when you say Autumn leaves have symmetrical line like butterfly wings that put a clear image in my head!

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